The most spectacular thing about this description from B.A.P.S. is the point of view, looking at everything from the perspective of Nisi and Mickey. Describing the fancy bathroom as having “two toilets, side by side” makes us as readers try to mentally figure out what we’re looking at (a bidet).

The writing uses short and fragmented sentences and is very simple in describing how the situation escalates. It’s funny and easy to read.